tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9181408260307523717.post139078796538513882..comments2015-09-19T21:47:56.293+12:00Comments on Sophie's Portfolio: Writting SampleSophieW15http://www.blogger.com/profile/02862812337482016659noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9181408260307523717.post-54625728637166795832014-06-29T13:00:57.135+12:002014-06-29T13:00:57.135+12:00Sophie, I think you have captured the essence of h...Sophie, I think you have captured the essence of how heat travels. Next time it would be great to see you do some self editing and looking for ways to add more detail to your piece and not by just adding examples like the surfer etc.Troy Duckworthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05604395648875507690noreply@blogger.com