tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9181408260307523717.post4539107234040803582..comments2015-09-19T21:47:56.293+12:00Comments on Sophie's Portfolio: Writing Sample Shark Attack SophieW15http://www.blogger.com/profile/02862812337482016659noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9181408260307523717.post-31781887665009841622015-09-19T21:47:56.293+12:002015-09-19T21:47:56.293+12:00Wow Sophie, this writing piece shows how far you h...Wow Sophie, this writing piece shows how far you have come since you used to write with me last year. You now add more depth, detail and much better surface features, Well Done! Next time think about using the dialogue between your characters in an interesting way.Troy Duckworthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05604395648875507690noreply@blogger.com