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Friday 27 February 2015

Bus Stop Writing


Purpose: Describe the characters 

 There was a girl walking to the bus stop to go back home from school. But then she stopped. Her mouth opens wide and says. “ OMG A BUS STOP MADE OUT OF A BUS!”
She sits inside the bus stop and thinks I wounded if they are doing this to all the bus stops.
She sees the bus coming to pick her up. The bus stops right in front of her. Herrrrr! the doors open it is appositely dead no one else was on the bus. She asks the bus driver. “ Are the other bus stops are like that?” He answers. “ No. sorry kid.”
When she arrived home she says to here mum. “ Can we not move I want to stay here because there is this really cool bus stop.” 
The End
 This is an unedited pice of writing.




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