The Important Thing

WALT: Entertain

Description:  We read a story called “The Important Book” written by Margarent Wise Brown.  We looked at the structure of this writing  and decided to use this to create our own writing. I chose my cat Gonzo because he is starting to shake and getting old. So I chose my cat so I can remember him when he pass's away.

Task:  Choose an object to describe, using the same structure as Margaret Wise Brown in “The Important Book.”

Criteria:

• Brainstorm your ideas describing the object that you have chosen.  Use full sentences.
• Choose the most important thing.
• Make sure that your first sentence and last sentence are the same.
• List the ways you describe your object using a comma to separate your ideas.
• Edit your work for punctuation, ideas and spelling.
  

  

Evaluation:

• What are you most proud of and why?
  Well I am most proud of what I wrote because when Mum and Dad see's this they will think it is really good so that Mum and Dad can remember him like I will, because we love our cat Gonzo. 

• What challenged you the most and why?
  The thing that challenged me was the drawing because I kept on making him on the side but when I finished it it came up really good.

Feedback/Feedforward: 
Well done Sophie you have put great answers not just drawing you explained it and they tell me really what you are proud of and challenged by. Grace.S