Turn Up The Heat To Bring The Beat Back

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In troys writing group we have been working on Cinquains for our poems. We had to do one that is our passion.  So I chose Hip hop because I have done it since I was 4 and I love it.

Title: Turn Up The Heat To Bring The Back Beat

Dancing

Up the Music

Walking Pushing Turning

Jumping up and down while puffing

Hip Hop

 Feedback/Feedforward: You have done a great job on picturing in my mind what you where doing and I liked the suspense you gave me when I had to read to find out what you poem was about. Next time you could tell me more about  what you felt like maybe if you where sweating. You have done a great poem. Georgia :0 

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In troys writing group I made a poem about my dog Bella. I had to write down what I think of her. I hope you like this 

Bella

Woof Woof

Pating the pup

Slurping up the water

Howling and Barking at the front door,

Bark Bark

Inquiry Blog Post

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Every thursday we go to troys inquiry group. Our task was to plan, and decorate the Graduation 2015. I chose graduation because 1 I love decorating, and 2 I found so much fun. I'm benefiting the future by making a day for the year 6's to celebrate there last day at Russell Street School. Emma and I have been panting the Jenga white for graduation and then you are writing memories on them like Emma and I made a tester and says, Emma and Sophie 2015. 

Reflection: 

What did I accomplish? 

I accomplished making the amazing 2015 sign, also Emma and I had finished the wonderful jenga blocks so that all the year 6 can write their special memories at Russell Street School.

What made me chose this inquiry?

I chose this inquiry because; 1 I love decorating and 2 It was so much fun last year (But this year was different). And 3 The taster was a lot of fun!

What did you think was going to be easy but took longer than you thought? The amazing 2015 sign, because we had to put all the crape paper in, and then we had to put some poles through it, and the teacher started bleeding when he was cutting the poles! Also it was the wonderful jenga blocks because it took along time to do the paint and then dry for the next layer!

Blooms Questions

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We have been reading The Sign Of A Warrior in book bash. My reading partner is Fletcher. Our task was to make some questions for each other about what we have read or what will happen. Here are my buddy questions and my answer's. (Buddy questions in bold!)

1. Tell me one time you thorough something at an animal to save your friend?
Never had to

2. What would you have done if your friend got attacked by a animal?
Yelled for help, scare the animal away.

3. If you were in africa in a village what is the first thing you will do?
train to be a girl warrior.

4. What do you think will happen next?
That he sees a spider up close.

Free Verse Poetry

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In Troys writing group we have been working on free verse writing. Can you figure out what it is about. Here it is

Hustle, Bustle

It was time, 
"Phew" and we're off...
The first time in the air,
I could hear the noise of the jet engine roaring through the sky.

Rumble, Rumble

We are going down, we're swaying in the air like a plastic bag in the wind.
"Bang!" 
We have landed.
We grab our bags and leave the airport.

Clip Clop, Clip Clp

When we were at the beach I saw a blue starfish, 
It felt all slimy and bumpy.

Ripple Ripple

All my hair was braided also my friend sam did the Samantha does it to.
Once Mum took a photo I saw what amazing job the ladies did.

Clatter, Clatter.

Once my brother goes into the water I could taste the salty water. 
Oh No Jack is drowning! 
So mum jumps in to save him. 
I could feel the splashes.

Ripple Ripple

Mum has saved the day! 
What a great time at Fiji.

Evaluation:
1.Reflect on the link to senses you used.
I have used all of the senses in my writing. ( See, Hear, felt, Smell, Taste.)

2.Reflect on the language features you used.
I have us in these in my writing pice I even checked with aye. 

3.Reflect on what you could improve on next time
Next time I think I should use all the language features like Visual Imagery, and a couple more.

Poetry

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Today we have been working on poetry for writing our task was to do free style. We had to think of a memory that we had experience before. I chose Movie world because I had just been there. And I had a great time on all the rides. Here is my writing: 

On a Boiling Hot day

we went onto a tall tower. That had a batman top. We went in. I could smell the fear

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Next we went to the log ride we went went down backwards. I am right at the back scared like a turtle meeting a human for the first time

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Then we went forwards I could hear people in front of me soaking their fears.

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh