In troys writing group we have been working on Cinquains for our poems. We had to do one that is our passion. So I chose Hip hop because I have done it since I was 4 and I love it.
Title: Turn Up The Heat To Bring The Back Beat
Dancing
Up the Music
Walking Pushing Turning
Jumping up and down while puffing
Hip Hop
Feedback/Feedforward: You have done a great job on picturing in my mind what you where doing and I liked the suspense you gave me when I had to read to find out what you poem was about. Next time you could tell me more about what you felt like maybe if you where sweating. You have done a great poem. Georgia :0
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