Monday, 30 November 2015

Turn Up The Heat To Bring The Beat Back

In troys writing group we have been working on Cinquains for our poems. We had to do one that is our passion.  So I chose Hip hop because I have done it since I was 4 and I love it.

Title: Turn Up The Heat To Bring The Back Beat
Up the Music
Walking Pushing Turning
Jumping up and down while puffing
Hip Hop

 Feedback/Feedforward: You have done a great job on picturing in my mind what you where doing and I liked the suspense you gave me when I had to read to find out what you poem was about. Next time you could tell me more about  what you felt like maybe if you where sweating. You have done a great poem. Georgia :0 

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