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Monday 9 November 2015

Poetry

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Today we have been working on poetry for writing our task was to do free style. We had to think of a memory that we had experience before. I chose Movie world because I had just been there. And I had a great time on all the rides. Here is my writing: 

On a Boiling Hot day
we went onto a tall tower. That had a batman top. We went in. I could smell the fear

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Next we went to the log ride we went went down backwards. I am right at the back scared like a turtle meeting a human for the first time

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Then we went forwards I could hear people in front of me soaking their fears.

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

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